Friday, April 15, 2011

writing essay by me n my group

Miss Zue ask my group and I to do an essay about gendor issue..
We are trying the best,but alot of mistaken detected by miss zue..
lets check it out what we are trying to do..
A lot of mistake! Don't laugh at us!
p/s : Dont do again what we are already do..Its ashamed! Like a secondary school student!!

Alot of mistake..Click picture to see the comments by miss zue

Click picture to see more clearly.A lot of comments from miss zue.

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